• Paragone@lemmy.worldEnglish
    2·
    3 months ago

    Feel free to reject what I say as worthless or inapplicable…

    Please try doing some no-stark-lines shading art,

    perhaps some charcoals or something,

    to get you farther into right-hemisphere-dominance mode, RMind, as I call it…

    Some of what you’ve earned shows you’re earning some RMind, but the lines-centric stuff is preventing you from getting deeper into it…

    just an opinion of some internet rando, is all…

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    • Nikki@lemmy.worldEnglish
      3·
      3 months ago

      im sure this is good advice if it was requested, but id avoid criticism without being promoted for it

    • Rutty@sh.itjust.worksOPEnglish
      1·
      3 months ago

      I’d only be interested in charcoal if it had immediate benefits. It’s sounds like it might.

      Right now I am interested in cleaning up line work and creating the impression of dimensionality.

      Would adding color be a good way to help legibility?

      I feel like I want to avoid charcoal like the plague, but again if it’s a worthwhile investment of time, I guess I could.

      Below are some additional examples of what I have been drawing.